tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566494467063173740.post7669378061729422485..comments2023-05-21T06:47:34.007-07:00Comments on AdvPhoto Spring08: Project Proposal:dvisserhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00372521984134857668noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566494467063173740.post-26411869447499047652008-04-06T21:13:00.000-07:002008-04-06T21:13:00.000-07:00Your first sequence of images made a strong foray ...Your first sequence of images made a strong foray into the relationship between environmental space/structure and psychological space/structure. I look forward to seeing where you have taken this. With regard to the proposal itself, I hope you will keep working at writing about your ideas on a daily basis - I think the language could be clarified to help the viewer better access your ideas.dvisserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00372521984134857668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-566494467063173740.post-86352884505750034792008-03-11T21:26:00.000-07:002008-03-11T21:26:00.000-07:00I like the idea of "converting...spaces to various...I like the idea of "converting...spaces to various installations." What I like is that you are considering the photograph to be the conduit that transforms the actual space into an installation (something other than it is in reality). Am I reading this correctly? Or are you actually creating new spaces and documenting them? Either is interesting, but please clarify during the critique.Modesto Covarrubiashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08446214688565451903noreply@blogger.com